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Page3 - [link] Page4 - [link] HE REALIZED IT!!!! "...Because deep in your heart you were always afraid. Afraid to be honest with him and confess your true feelings.And now only him can turn you back. Otherwise, you'ii never become a human again" Will be continued on page 3 and now I understand it needs page 4 XD ---------- This is for another  - chan contest!!!!!Alternate way for her dodji - FAITH [link] You can join contest here [link] Comments
 AMAZING work
 That's beautiful!
I absolutely love gloving! And characters expression too... Mistychu sooo kawai! ^__^ Great work, my darling!  OMG - I-have-so-herat-beating...
and I really wanna cry... This - emotions! This - dialogue - your... DRAWINGS.. It is sooo awesome, so lovely, so non-discribeable... I really, really appriciate this. This is such a WOW idea. I so love it. Ash is looking so - painful and... sorry for Misty... I can't discribe it. And Misty... she really doesn't know what to do. Jirachi looks original, same as Pikachu. And I LOVE the panel Ash goes on his knees and tries to touch Misty. To reach her. It's so... so... OMG... I have to cry now... Thank you. Thank you so much for this emotional, unexpected, touching and totally lovely picture, peace and comic. You - are - awesome. It's like YOU were the right creator of FAITH. I have to go... But first I want this emotion again. O-M-F-G! Hilarious... Simply hilarious... -- Pokeshipping's Depressed Moments - Slideshow (November, 28th 2009)  this is gorgeous!
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 i think you should win!  --  OWM Very nice.. Great Job!
 WOW!
--  Hey check out my art and poems!  The emotions portrayed by the characters can be felt by the viewer. You did a splendid job with the details, the facial expressions, the effects,and the coloring. I'm loss at words. I'm utterly amazed with such a fine work that has full of meaning and emotions.
Misty and Ash really look great there. It really makes me wish that there was a scene in the anime such as did. Really great job! -- "You won't know until you try" |
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Critiques
Let me start by saying that this comic page is simply stunning. I love the colors, which are really light and airy- they make the whole piece just seem that much more magical. It's soft and reminds me, especially in the bottom panel, of the soft sweet art of winnie the pooh bear. just absolutely adorable.
The comic is a new take on their relationship revealed. It's kinda sappy in a cute way. I personally was never really into this sort of reveal. I'm more for the stubbornly never admit my feelings cause it's embarrassing type of relationship. I find Ash and Misty to be extremely prideful. And admitting one's feelings to each other would just be soooo painful, no matter what the answer. So I have a hard time believing completely the Ash realizing how Misty cares or Misty's confession. Misty just needs to kiss him out of the blue. No lead up at all. Then maybe Ash will get it.
But anyway... back to the comic:
I like how Jirashii changed Misty- something I would have never thought of. I didn't really think of 'how' Misty got changed- and looking back on it, I think I really should have. So you got one up on me.
But I think some of the meaning in this comic got lost in translation. There's a few issues with grammar. "Jirachi why are you turned me into a PIKACHU! I won't stay like this forever!!!" Should probably be written, "Jirachi, why did you turn me into a pikachu? Will I stay like this forever?"
There were a few problems with the first page, for the same reasons. But nothing too serious. Just some small things that can be fixed with a beta reader.
If English isn't your first language, you might consider having a beta reader to double check your grammar. Because even a small mistake can completely change what you were trying to say. English is a mean language like that. Whole bunch of slang that messes things up too.
However, as a whole, I think this page is impressive. It perfectly catches the emotion. I wish you luck in the contest! And as it is right now, I think you have a great shot at winning!
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